This is the final for ALONE. I changed my openings for the thick wall. I also extended the thick wall. I am very proud of this project it turned out better than expected. The space really feels like it holds the meaning of the poem. It both has observation and reflection aspects that are present in the poem.
It also has great lighting effects which add to a great reading environment.
It also has great lighting effects which add to a great reading environment.
Your model has a lot going on. I wish it were more restrained and controlled. If you could focus on one technique to create articulate openings I think i could more closely understand how the project achieves observation and reflection. I like the lowered floor as a move. Sectional play is always good in my book.
ReplyDeleteI agree with josh about the openings and the sectional play. I think you could be even more bold with the thickened plane, letting it cause the user to have to squat down even more or putting the user even more in an isolated spot in the ground, creating even more contrast. To back-up josh's statement I think all the openings distract a bit from the overall idea, and a few well articulated and very intentional openings could better serve your concept.
ReplyDeleteI love you initial interpretation of the poem and wish that somehow the idea of people needing to work together/community could somehow be explored or expressed in the project.